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Becky by KSapphire8989 Becky by KSapphire8989
Artist's Note: She comes from another rp I've done. At the time I caught the Kingdom Hearts fever, which I haven't felt in a very long time. I love the keyblade masters but for some reason I like the Heartless, Nobodies and Inverse a whole lot more. *meows softly* Anyway, She is one the royal chiefs in the moondagger palace. Ki How introduced her to Hero do to his late night Snacking. However, there was come controversy because Hero turned out to be a Keyblade master and of course she is a Heartless. So they are destined to be enemies. However, Since the rules are a little different and Hero was forbidden to harm her. Becky was force to feed on these artificial hearts made by Sophie Snowblossom the sorceress of the moondagger empire. (rp with :iconherodragonkingofzeta:)

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I like the color palette that you chose and how her eyes are yellow. That gives the overall piece a nice pop of color and defiantly brings the viewer's eyes to her face which then the view flows to the rest of the character.

To me her foot seems a bit small and her lower arm a bit short. Did you use a reference or stock photo of a model in a pose like this? For me, having an image in front of me helps with the anatomy and some difficult perspective place. (Like arms. Arms give me so much trouble) Another problem part of her anatomy is her upper arm/shoulder. Is that curve there her shoulder or her upper arm muscle?

You have a very nice idea on the lighting and shadowing. It adds a new dimension to the piece and makes it seems more realistic. I like how you kept your line of color in the same direction. They help with the flow of the image and adding texture to her clothing and her hair.

The last thing I would have liked to see is some sort of background. (Which I know can be difficult. I hate doing backgrounds) I want to know where she is and where is she sitting. Is she sitting on a bed, a table, outside?

I really do like this character and this image. I like her character design and her outfit. I think you did a very good job on this. :D
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I hate being brutally honest, I hate hate hate being that, but it's at this point that I feel like I have to be. Okay, first issue I noticed was the feet and legs. Her foot looks malformed/unnaturally small in the picture, and it seems like her legs aren't the length they're supposed to be. This may just be the leg issue working in conjunction with her arms, but they seem too long, and her shoulder seems like it's absolutely dislocated, which also makes her neck look a little weird because she seems like she's turning a little too far - again that's probably just because of the shoulder issue. Another thing is, while I don't particularly have anything personal against the method of which you colour things, might I suggest using a digital tool like GIMP in and inking your sketches? Assuming you don't ink them at the moment, I really can't tell.
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KidoKoala Jan 12, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Can I feel on her legs? XD
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KSapphire8989 Jan 13, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
You seem to really like her legs. I would suggest to ask her.
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:iconkidokoala:
KidoKoala Jan 13, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
*asks her about it*
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KSapphire8989 Jan 13, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
*Becky smiled and looks at him* Sure
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:iconkidokoala:
KidoKoala Jan 13, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
*feels on them*
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KSapphire8989 Jan 14, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
*Becky looked at him curiously*
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KidoKoala Jan 15, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
lol
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KSapphire8989 Jan 15, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
What's so funny?
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nintendoshadow25 Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Super cute ^^
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KSapphire8989 Jan 7, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks a bunches. ^^
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