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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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To me her foot seems a bit small and her lower arm a bit short. Did you use a reference or stock photo of a model in a pose like this? For me, having an image in front of me helps with the anatomy and some difficult perspective place. (Like arms. Arms give me so much trouble) Another problem part of her anatomy is her upper arm/shoulder. Is that curve there her shoulder or her upper arm muscle?
You have a very nice idea on the lighting and shadowing. It adds a new dimension to the piece and makes it seems more realistic. I like how you kept your line of color in the same direction. They help with the flow of the image and adding texture to her clothing and her hair.
The last thing I would have liked to see is some sort of background. (Which I know can be difficult. I hate doing backgrounds) I want to know where she is and where is she sitting. Is she sitting on a bed, a table, outside?
I really do like this character and this image. I like her character design and her outfit. I think you did a very good job on this.
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